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Monday, March 27, 2006

The Jade Mountain By Kathy Cao

Once upon a time there was a beautiful princess, Princess Ciara. Princess Ciara was trapped on top of the Jade Mountain by the evil spirit Pincushion. One day King Chad (Her beloved king) had got a letter from Pincushion telling him that Princess Ciara is trapped in his evil cage, and if he didn't rescue her before the sun came down the next day she would be killed.

Early the next day he had started climbing the unclimbable mountain. The mountain was called Unclimbable because it was an unclimbable mountain. This is because it was unclimbable. When you think you are nearly to the top the mountain keeps building up in layers. But King Chad never gave up. King Chad climbed until he was nearly to the top. Then he found a rock that looked like a shape of a door. He started to push it and then it opened. He went inside and it looked like a place full of controls.

"Aha" he shouted, "This must be the place of the person who is controlling the mountain." "And this must be the person!” A person with black hair, long beard and wearing a long robe started running. But King Chad stopped him. A minute later...... "BOOM!" "BASH!" "BOOM" and the controller was killed.

Finally, King Chad continued his journey to rescue his beautiful princess. When he got to the top he checked the sun and then went in the dark cave at the top of the mountain. He called Princess Ciara five times until the evil spirit Pincushion appeared.

"She's in the cave below.'' he said. King Chad started walking but Pincushion stopped him. "But you have to fight with me first!" he shouted "Ok, bring it on!" shouted King Chad. BOOM BASH BOOM BASH BOOM BASH BOOM BASH BOOM.

Dust blew everywhere. Until all the dust settled, King Chad appeared still well and alive. He came to the bottom cave and got Princess Ciara out. "Oh Thank-you so much Chad! You’re my hero!" she said tiredly.

The End

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