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Wednesday, March 29, 2006

The Story of Rachel Raspberry By Luci McAfee

Long ago in Sunny-sun Land their lived a king, queen and princess. Their names were Pamela Peach, Peter Pawpaw and Rechel Raspberry. Everyone liked them because they were very nice. When Rachel went to school she made lots of friends including Amber Artichoke, Jazmine Jelly and Saph Strawberry. She did not like Rhonda Rockmelon. At the castle, Tayla Toffeeapple and Andrea Apple have been staying with Pamela Peach and Peter Pawpaw.

When Rachel Raspberry was 15 she went with her friends to Chocolate Land where Jazmine Jelly lives. That's where they met Tahnee Toffee. Next they went to Veggie-Veg Land where Amber Artichoke lives, then they went to Greenfields where Saph Strawberry lives where they met Rachel Redskin. The next day Rachel Raspberry got a call from her great grandma to tell her to come home quickly for a special surprise.
The day that Rachel got home Tayla Toffeeapple greeted her to a room that her mum was sitting in. She walked in and saw that she had a baby sister. Pam Peach told Rachel that her name was Samara Spaghetti.
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